Post by jaggedstar on Jul 14, 2012 20:11:08 GMT -5
DON'T CRY OUT FOR GOD
we are all lambs to the slaughter now, don't worry it will be over
(( I can't find a good picture in the 340x150 format. I might work on one, but it might take a while... ))NAME jaggedkit, jaggedpaw, jaggedlightning, jaggedstar
CLAN thunderclan
POSITION leader
GENDER male
AGE 40 moons
APPEARANCE jaggedstar is a huge white American Shorthair tom with black paws and tail tip and with what look is like a little lightningbolt on his right shoulder. his eyes are a deep emerald green with darker flecks towards the center. on his face, he has a light ash-like dusting on his nose and an orangey-pink nose with a slight black outline. Most of his claws are black, although you'll see a few are clear when he unsheaths his masive and deadly sharp claws, excilent for climbing the many trees in thunderclan. under his smooth white and black spotted pelt, you could mistake his muscles for rocks. they are clearly visible and ripple his large frame as he moves.
CLAN thunderclan
POSITION leader
GENDER male
AGE 40 moons
APPEARANCE jaggedstar is a huge white American Shorthair tom with black paws and tail tip and with what look is like a little lightningbolt on his right shoulder. his eyes are a deep emerald green with darker flecks towards the center. on his face, he has a light ash-like dusting on his nose and an orangey-pink nose with a slight black outline. Most of his claws are black, although you'll see a few are clear when he unsheaths his masive and deadly sharp claws, excilent for climbing the many trees in thunderclan. under his smooth white and black spotted pelt, you could mistake his muscles for rocks. they are clearly visible and ripple his large frame as he moves.
HOLD ON THOUGH YOU'RE
alone i am there with you, that much at least i can promise, you know
LIKES speckled sunlight through the canopy of the forest, hunting, fighting, training apprentices, staning up for his clan, and gatherings.
DISLIKES tresspassers on his territory, foxes, badgers, dogs, and swimming.
HOPES to get a mate with as much courage as him, have his own clan born kits, and train the best deputy he can.
FEARS being overtaken by another clan and dieing alone in the forest by another animal.
PERSONALITY jaggedstar is a loyal and strong headed tom, like any other thunderclan cat. although sometimes he can be a grumpy, nothing can stop him from doing what's right for his clan. when he is in that grumpy mood, he can be a bit snapy and mean towards the one who annoyed him, or take his anger out on another cat. jaggedstar is a bit anti-social and is indipendant which makes it very hard for him to try and find the right mate. this also makes it hard for him at gatherings at times. he does have the loud anoucning voice, though, and always hold his chin high even though he may be nervous.
he is always sure of himself, sometimes leading to bad dicisions. usually, he is corrected before he makes the decisions though. one thing he really likes about being leader is that he has an open mind to new ideas (when he isn't grumpy) and trusts his deputy and senior warriors to come up with good ideas, if they are ever the future leaders. he takes pride in his clanmates, and swears never to let them down, no matter what the situation. this, making him the right leader for thunderclan.
DISLIKES tresspassers on his territory, foxes, badgers, dogs, and swimming.
HOPES to get a mate with as much courage as him, have his own clan born kits, and train the best deputy he can.
FEARS being overtaken by another clan and dieing alone in the forest by another animal.
PERSONALITY jaggedstar is a loyal and strong headed tom, like any other thunderclan cat. although sometimes he can be a grumpy, nothing can stop him from doing what's right for his clan. when he is in that grumpy mood, he can be a bit snapy and mean towards the one who annoyed him, or take his anger out on another cat. jaggedstar is a bit anti-social and is indipendant which makes it very hard for him to try and find the right mate. this also makes it hard for him at gatherings at times. he does have the loud anoucning voice, though, and always hold his chin high even though he may be nervous.
he is always sure of himself, sometimes leading to bad dicisions. usually, he is corrected before he makes the decisions though. one thing he really likes about being leader is that he has an open mind to new ideas (when he isn't grumpy) and trusts his deputy and senior warriors to come up with good ideas, if they are ever the future leaders. he takes pride in his clanmates, and swears never to let them down, no matter what the situation. this, making him the right leader for thunderclan.
KNOW WHAT'S TO COME
do not accept this, though we're alone we must fight for each breath
HISTORY jaggedkit: jaggedkit was born to sunnyflower and blackshadow of thunderclan along with his brother sunkit. he had the looks of his father, while sunkit of his mother. they were the only two in the litter, and both parents adored them. sunkint was a bit shy, and usually never left the nest, while jaggedkit (named for the lightning-like shape on his shoulder) loved to explore the camp. he was a fairly obedient kit, but one time curiousity got the best of him, and at 5 1/2 moons old he stepped outside the camp walls and walked around the entrance. soon realizing his apprentice ceramony could be held back, he rushed back into the camp unnoticed.
jaggedpaw: his apprentice ceremony was the day of the full moon. He was given coleleap as a mentor; outgoing, selfless, loyal, and most of all, a great friend. jaggedpaw would need a friend, for his mother passed away from green-cough a few moons after he was made an apprentice. not grieving too much, jaggedpaw moved on, but was more worried about his father. he had almost compeltely shut down after Sunnyflower was brought to starclan. he wouldn't wake up until he was needed, not wanting to loose connection with starclan for too long, trying to find his beloved mate. he trained as hard as he could, learning every bit of information from coleleap as he could. he was an amaizing hunter and fighter, and proved himself as a leader when it came to training with other apprentices.
Warrior Jaggedlightning: jaggedlightning was apprenticed early due to his outstanding skills to be a warrior. he did nothing at all to spark coleleap's interest of making him a warrior early on. he was only 10 moons, and the night was very stormy. most warriors watched or listened from their dens as stormystar (the leader at the time) called out for jaggedpaw. it was thundering and lightning out, an omen passed from the medicine cat that he would be good luck to the clan. in that honor, he was given the name jaggedlightning. his father couldn't stand it anylonger, for he was still sulking in his den, came out into the rain and started the chant for his son. the whole clan soon chimed in, as well as his jelous brother, sunpaw, who became a warrior at 12 moons.
the vigil was long, cold, but rewarding. blackshadow came to him in the morning and told him he would go to sleep, which he gladly did, missing the full moon gathering that night. his warrior days were as fun as anyothers, aquiring an apprentice, dewpaw, and training her to be her best, eventually gaining her warrior name, dewclaw.
Deputy Jaggedlightning: at only 20 moons, jaggedlightning was made deputy when stormystar died, loosing her last life to a fox. indegomist was the deputy then, and appointed him as her deputy. the whole clan approved, seeing his natural leadership skills that would soon be needed. indegomist was old, and only lasted for 15 moons, making jaggedlightning 35 moons when he was needed as the new thunderclan leader.
THIS CHARACTER IS PLAYED BY VICIOUS
